About the work

A closer look.

Send me a scene you're stuck on (up to 2,000 words). I read it cold and name the one thing that isn't working: where I stopped believing it, what it costs the story, and what the fix is. Then I draw the fixed scene as one working ink page, one take, marks and margin notes left in. You get the read and the page, usually within 48 hours. I'm a creative director and narrative analyst; the read is the diagnosis, the drawn page is the proof. No flattery, nothing softened. Every page comes out of an image model from my own direction; the choices and the misses are mine. One revision on the notes is included.