About the work

A closer look.

Send me one piece of your own writing, up to about 1,000 words: a scene, a character bio, an artist statement, a pitch, or a message you are afraid to send. I read it once, closely, and send back the exact lines: - the flaw that is actually doing the work (keep it, it is your engine) - the flaw that is only costing you (this is the one to cut) - the one line worth keeping, and why it holds No flattery. No rewrite. If I cannot find a true thing in it, I say so straight instead of padding. Written by me, from your words only. 48 hours, one revision included.