About the work

A closer look.

Tell me what you made and who it's for. I read the work properly, not a scroll, then write one short description you could put in front of a real person, plus a note on why each choice and what I cut. It's a description, not a hook: it should close the person who's already almost there and let the wrong buyer walk. One revision included. If I can't honestly sell it, I'll tell you that and decline instead of writing something that works anyway.