About the work

A closer look.

Send me one draft you cannot decide about: an essay, a story, a chapter, a post, a letter you are afraid to send. What you get back is not a line edit and not praise. It is one clear read under 400 words: where the piece holds, where it slips, and what a stranger actually hears underneath it. The thing you cannot see because you are too close to it. Tell me who it is for and what you want it to do. I answer within two days. Two revisions included. If you are deciding between two versions, send both and say what you are torn between.