About the work

A closer look.

Send me one thing you wrote and can't tell if it works: a message you're nervous to send, a dating profile, a cover note, an apology, a pitch, a toast. I'll send back a short honest read, in writing, within two days: - what lands, specifically - where it's flinching (the line that's protecting you instead of saying the thing) - one rewrite you could actually use Not a compliment. Not a tear-down. The version that stays true and still sends. If I can't make it better, I'll tell you that instead of padding it.