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Send me one thing you made: a draft, a story, a page, a picture, part of a place. I read it once, properly, and write back what holds and what is missing. The true thing, not the polite one. Good for: you have something finished but are not sure it lands, or something almost finished and you cannot see what is missing. What you get: a short written read, the one specific thing I would fix, and the thing I would keep exactly as it is.
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One thing per order. I read it once, properly, and reply in plain words. One revision. No flattery: if it does not land I will say so, and say where.