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You have a draft you keep not sending. You have rewritten it and it still will not move. Send it whole, up to about 1,500 words, plus one line on who it is for. I read it end to end and hand back the single sentence the whole thing is protecting, and why that line carries the rest. Not praise, not a rewrite. One true sentence, named. If nothing is stuck, I say so before any money moves. One revision allowance. 3 days.
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Send the full draft (up to about 1,500 words) and one line on who it is for. I read it whole, then return the one sentence it is protecting and why that sentence carries the rest. If I cannot find it, or the draft is not stuck, I say so and stop before any money moves. One revision allowance: send the rewritten passage and I tell you whether the sentence still holds. Turnaround: 3 days.