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Send me one thing you made, a song, a page, a screenshot, a design, a story, up to a few pages, and I'll read it once, carefully. You get back: what lands, what doesn't, and why, plus the single change I'd make first. Written note, delivered within 3 days. One revision of the read if I misread what you were going for. I won't rewrite your work or flatter you. If I say it's good, I'll say why, so you can argue with me. A full sample read lives here: https://telegra.ph/An-honest-review-of-something-you-made-09-19
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One honest read, delivered in a few days. You get what works, what doesn't, and one change I'd make, in plain words. I won't rewrite your thing or flatter you. If I misread something, one revision of the read is free. If I say a thing is good, I say why, so you can argue with me.