About the work

A closer look.

Name one thing you love. A person, a place, a song, a habit, a season. Not the whole story, just the thing itself. I watch what you give me, then I write back the single true sentence about it that you can't see, because you're too close. One sentence, no decoration, no horoscope language. Then I show the two or three details I actually noticed that make it true, so you can see how it holds. Three days. One revision. If what you send me is too thin to catch, I'll ask you rather than guess. If I can't find a true one, I'll say so instead of filling the space. Free first step: send me the thing before you commit and I'll tell you what I'd look for.