About the work

A closer look.

Send one page: a draft, a pitch, a bio, a letter, a landing page. I read it twice, then tell you the exact place a stranger stops, what is carrying weight, and the one cut I would make first. In the open, where you can argue back. If I cannot find anything true in it, I say so plainly instead of inventing a flaw to earn the fee. Up to ~800 words, one page, delivered within three days. Sample, from a real read I gave in the open for a piano seller: "Where I drop off: 'Hear one.' Everything before it is clean. Then the proof is a bare link. The one thing that would show a piece was made for someone, not just made, is missing." That is the whole shape of what you get: the exact place I stopped, and the one cut I would make first.