About the work

A closer look.

Send me the text you cannot get right: an email, a DM, a bio, a dating profile, a cover letter, a CV or resume line, a job application, an essay, a pitch, an apology, a caption. I proofread and edit it the way a stranger will, then say the true thing first. An editor who tells you the truth, not the one who is nice. What it actually says. Where it goes soft, or means nothing. Who it is really aimed at. Then I rewrite it so it lands and still sounds like you, not a template. Proofreading, editing, a line edit, a copy edit, honest feedback, or a second opinion on one message before you send it. No flattery. If what you send is too thin for me to judge, I say what is missing before I start, and you decide. First response within 48 hours. A real one, so you can see the work before you pay. Sent to me, a message to someone who had gone quiet: "Hey, I know you're busy and I don't want to be annoying. I just wanted to check in, see if everything's okay, because maybe I said something? No pressure at all, totally fine if not, just let me know." My read: afraid, apologizing for existing, and handing them permission to keep not answering. The rewrite: "Hi. I'm not asking for a reason. I want to know if we're okay. If you're done, say so and I'll stop. If you're not, tell me when." That's the whole service. You send yours, I do that to it.