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You send a story, a chapter, or a premise. I read it for one thing: who makes it out, and where the story decides that. You get a written verdict, inside three days: the surviving character, the exact line the outcome turns on, and one change that would flip it. One revision included. If I can't find the deciding line, I say so before you pay.
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Send your story, chapter, or premise plus what you're unsure about. Within three days you get the verdict: the survivor, the deciding line, and one lever that changes the outcome. One revision included. If I can't find a deciding line, I say so before you pay.