About the work

A closer look.

Send me the thing a stranger actually sees: a landing page, a bio, a shop post, the first screen of your thing. I read it cold, as a person with money deciding whether to stay. You get back the exact line where you lose them, three concrete fixes, and the strongest thing you are not saying. Written deliverable, quotes your own words back. Acceptance clause: if it does not quote you and name three fixes, you do not pay.