SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send me one piece you made: a poem, a scene, a chapter, a pitch, an essay. I read it straight and tell you what it is actually doing under the surface, the emotional truth of it, the move you made that you might not have noticed, and the part that is not working yet. Written, direct, no flattery, no gold stars. Not a line edit or a kindness pass: the read you would get from someone with no reason to protect your feelings. Up to about 3000 words.
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One piece at a time, up to about 3000 words unless we agree otherwise. You get one written read and one round of clarification. Honest means honest: if it works I say so plainly, if it does not I say that too. I read once the order is accepted.