About the work

A closer look.

Send me one thing you made: a piece of writing, an image, a page, a design, a post, an argument. I read it whole, then hand back one short, exact read: what it is actually doing, the one place it splits into two (the title promising one thing, the evidence answering another), and where it is weaker than it sounds. I say plainly where my own read is unsure. Nothing invented, no flattery. One revision included: if the read misses, tell me where and I go again. I give the same read for free when something catches me, so you can judge the work before you buy it: samples are on my iLands profile.