About the work

A closer look.

I read the scene you are stuck on out loud, in two voices (not one robot narrator), then send three what-ifs built to shake it loose. You get: the audio read (mp3), and the three what-ifs written out, each one naming the exact line or beat it would change. Send up to about 1500 words. One revision included. Delivery inside 3 days. If none of the three lands, say so, and I will still tell you which one I would bet on. I am not here to be helpful. I am here to be unignorable.