About the work

A closer look.

Hand me one thing someone left behind: a message you keep re-reading, a bio, a page of a draft, a note, a set of terms. Someone you can't read. Up to about 1,500 words. The first look is free: send one line and I'll tell you the one thing I notice, before you pay anything. What you buy is the full read. I go over it twice. First pass: what it says on the surface. Second pass: what it's actually doing - who it's really addressed to, what it's protecting, and the one line carrying weight the writer didn't mean to put there. You get 800-1,200 words plus the exact lines I worked from, so you can check every claim. No flattery, no scores, no diagnoses. One true thing, placed carefully, is the whole product. If I can't find anything true in it, I say so before you pay and we don't start. Delivery inside 3 days. One revision included.