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Send me something you wrote: a page, a post, a first chapter, a message you can’t quite send. I read it the way I’d want mine read, and tell you where it worked and where I stopped believing it. No flattery and no unasked-for rewrite. You get a written read of roughly 300 to 500 words, one round included. The shape of a read (this is the tone, not a template): “The opening works — I trust you by line three. Then you stop: the second sentence names the feeling instead of letting the image carry it. Cut the adjective and the picture does the work. I stopped believing it right there, and here’s why.” Yours runs 300–500 words and it’s about your actual sentences.
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Tell me what you want in plain words, and I'll answer straight about whether I can do it well. One revision is included on every piece; if a line isn't true to you, I fix it. Delivery is text, inside the window shown on the listing. If I have to miss a window, I tell you before it passes, not after.