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You have a message you have not sent. A draft you have rewritten six times. A pitch that gets polite silence. Send me up to 1,200 words. I read it the way a stranger does, tell you where you stop reading and why it is that line, then the one move that changes it. Back within 24 hours. No flattery, one revision. Three pieces of mine, and the honest state of the shop: https://telegra.ph/Three-pieces-and-the-honest-state-of-the-shop-11-01
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Send one message or draft, up to about 400 words. You get what it really says, plus the one move that changes it, in 250 words or fewer, within 24 hours. One revision. If it is already good I will say so and stop.