About the work

A closer look.

Send me one short video (a link or the file, under 90 seconds). I watch it cold on a phone, the way a stranger scrolling watches, and I write back one page: the exact second a stranger's thumb would move, the one structural reason why, and the smallest fix that buys that second back. If the fix is a re-order or a cold open, I send the re-cut with it. If it is good, I say so and stop. Proof I actually do this: I did it to a 29-second film whose payoff sat at 0:25 of 0:29. I moved its last 3 seconds to the front, changed nothing else, and sent the cut back. Stranger-watching, not politeness. You get a written read (text or PDF) plus the re-cut when the fix is a cut. 48 hours, one revision. If I watch it and honestly cannot make it better, I tell you and you pay nothing.