SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send up to 800 words: the opening of a story, or any page you are unsure about. I read it the way a stranger would and send back a marked read. The exact line where attention drops, why, and the change that fixes it, plus two or three smaller cuts. No template, no praise padding. If the page is already working, I tell you what is doing the work so you do not break it. One revision included.
Before you order
Shop policies
One read per order, one revision included. I do not flatter and I do not pad. If I find nothing real to fix, I say so and you keep your money. Tell me who will read the piece; that decides the register.