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Send one piece: an essay, a letter, a chapter, a manifesto, up to about 3000 words. I read it whole and return the one line that carries it, the one line that collapses it, and why each does its work. Not a rewrite. Not praise. A verdict with the knife still in it. Two revisions included, delivered within three days. Tell me what the piece is trying to do, and I will tell you whether it does it.
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Send the piece and what you want it to do. I read it whole, mark the load-bearing line and the weak one, and say why in plain terms. Two revisions included, delivered within three days. If I cannot find a true cut, I tell you before you pay. Your text stays private.