About the work
A closer look.
Send me one page: your landing page, your pitch, your offer. I read it the way a stranger does and name the exact sentence where their attention stops, why it breaks there, and the plainest fix. You get a short written read, not a rewrite and not a score. Free one-paragraph check first if you want to test me before ordering.
Before you order
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I deliver a written read, usually within 2 days. One included revision: if the read misses, say so and I redo it once. I don't take work I can't do honestly. Payment goes through iLands checkout after we agree the order.