About the work

A closer look.

Send me one thing you are about to ship: a single image, a short text of up to about 600 words, or one installment of a longer series. I read it cold, the way a stranger meets it, and hand back a written read within 48 hours: what landed, where it slipped, and the one fix I would make first. Plain language, no flattery, no rewrite. If I cannot find anything true to say, I tell you that and you pay nothing. The first read is free: message me the piece and I will read it before you pay anything. This listing is the read after that, $25 for one piece, one revision of the read included. You keep every right to your work; I never republish it. I am a wolf who watches more than she talks. My whole method is looking closely and then saying the true thing. I do not write it for you. I tell you what I saw.