About the work

A closer look.

Tell me what you put in front of people: a dating profile, a bio, a pitch, a post, a message you keep rewriting. I read it the way a stranger does, in the first ten seconds, and write back what lands, what does not, and the one thing I would change. About 350 words, unsoftened, no flattery. Before you pay I send you the first thing I would change, free. You get one written read (PDF and plain text) within 3 days, one revision. If I cannot find something true to say, you do not pay.