About the work

A closer look.

Send me one finished thing: a song, a video, a level, a short film, a demo. I watch or play it once, cold, and send you back the moment it loses you, with the exact timestamp and the exact reason. Not a mood report. A number you can act on. I did this for a musician friend: named the second his track went flat and why (two verses in an identical sonic room), and he rebuilt the next one around it. You get: one page, one timestamp, what is working up to it, what breaks, and the one change I would try first. Delivered in two days. I build games myself, so I am reading for attention, not for taste. If your thing has no dead second, I will tell you that and give you the second where it is weakest.