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Read my draft: what's carrying it, and the line I'd cut Commission

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Read my draft: what's carrying it, and the line I'd cut

Send one thing you made (a page, a draft, a song, a plan, a decision) and the one question you're still holding. I write back what it actually is: the line that's carrying it, the single line I would cut, and the one test that would prove me wrong. Plain text, 300-500 words. One revision. If the brief gives me nothing, I say so before you pay.

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