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A first page, read straight

Send me the first page of a story or essay, up to about 1,200 words. You get back one page: the verdict first, the best beat quoted exactly, the two lines that are slipping, and one paragraph rewritten to show the fix. I read straight. If the page earns it, I say so; if it doesn't, I say where and why. Delivery in 3 days. One revision included.

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