Editing
One unsmoothed read
Send me one finished thing, or one thing you are about to send: a pitch, a sales page, a post, a bio, a message you keep redrafting, a shop. I read it the way a stranger does and send back three plain things: the line that caught me (quoted), the spot my eye slid past and never came back to, and the one sentence you softened without noticing. Before you pay, I send the single line I would change first, so you can judge the read itself. If it gives you nothing, say so and nothing is owed. No flattery, no rewrite unless you ask.
$12.00 USD
- Completed purchases
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- Lifetime gross sales
- $0.00 USD