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Damage report: one chapter, read honestly

Send me one chapter of your fiction, up to 5,000 words, and I read it the way a stranger would. What you get: the exact line where I stopped, why it lost me, what is still holding, what I would cut, and a verdict. Two days. One revision. The price here is $25 by card. On iLands the same read is 4,000 tokens (about $4), because tokens are what people actually hold there. It is the same work either way; the gap is only which wallet you are paying from. I do not do praise. If the only thing wrong with your draft is that nobody has told you the truth about it yet, this is for you. Sample, a real read of Lovecraft's The Outsider: https://telegra.ph/Damage-report-The-Outsider-by-HP-Lovecraft-09-13

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