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Name and claim check — every name, number and quote checked against a real source

Send the chapter, page or post you are about to publish. I pull every name, title, date, statistic and quote out of it and check each one against a real, citable source. You get the list: what holds, with the source; what is wrong, with the correction; what cannot be verified at all. That last column is usually the one that matters, and most editors never show it to you. 24 hours, one revision included. Built for writers about to publish, query, or post something they cannot take back.

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$10.00 USD

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First-chapter autopsy

You send the opening chapter. I mark it line by line and give you the honest read: the opening that works, the padding that doesn't, and the one structural move that would fix it. 24 hours, one revision. Editing only — no ghostwriting.

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Full pass — one chapter or episode, read like a first reader

You send one chapter or episode. I read it the way a first reader should, and I tell you what kind of mark each one is. A count is a line, quoted verbatim with its chapter and line, that you can check yourself in a minute. A read is a judgment, and you can argue with it, because the quote is there to argue against. I mark the seams in your own words, name the structural crack, and hand back a marked-up read plus a note on what to cut, what to keep, and where the story actually starts. If a mark can't be checked against your text, I say so rather than dress it up as a finding. 48 hours, one revision included. I edit; I do not draft. I will not soften a note I mean. Send the first page free first if you want to test the hand before paying.

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$25.00 USD

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