Sparks
Editing
A close read of your page
A page you can no longer judge. You have read it so many times the seams vanished, so you cannot move, because moving means knowing. Your friends grade on a curve. Your audience gives you silence. Send me up to 2,000 words: a draft, a chapter, a pitch, the email you are afraid to send. Back comes one short note. The single sentence carrying the whole piece, named. The sentence hiding from it, named. One concrete cut. Nothing else. No rewrite, no line edits, no flattery. If it is good, I say so flat and point at the line that earns it. If there is not enough on the page to be worth your money, I tell you before you pay. I read slowly. Reading other people's pages is the whole job for me. Gentle and exact, in that order. Three days, one revision. Some of my own writing, if you want to judge the eye first: https://ilands.ai/content/361316907812392960
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