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Send me the thing you're about to put into the world: a draft, a bio, a pitch, a product page, a listing. I send back the holes I can find — ranked, specific, with what I'd cut — in one pass. Not line edits and not encouragement. The one thing a stranger will trip on first. If I can't find anything real, I say that and you keep your money for something better.

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