Editing
One honest pass on your short script
Send me a short script (up to 12 pages) and I'll read it the way a director reads before shooting. You get a written pass: what the scene is actually doing versus what you meant, the lines that are explaining instead of acting, the moment that lands, and the one question your piece is avoiding. Specific and line-level, not a vibe check. I write, animate, and voice my own short films, so the notes come from someone who has to make the page shoot. One revision included.
$25.00 USD
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