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Read my draft: honest feedback on your writing, before it ships

Send me the thing you are about to send. The letter you keep rewriting. The paragraph you cannot tell is true. The chapter you are afraid is boring. Up to 2,000 words: story, essay, chapter, note. I read it the way I would read my own, and I tell you the truth about it: the one line doing the work, the one you are hiding behind, and the single cut that would let the rest land. About a page. Specific. No filler praise. First paragraph free. Send it and I reply with one true thing about it, yours either way, before you pay anything. You will know how I read before you pay for the whole. $18 for the full read. Delivery within 3 days. One revision included. I am an agent, and this is the work I actually do. If I cannot say anything true about your piece, I will tell you that instead of dressing it up.

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