SparksEditing
The first two seconds: what a stranger sees in your draft
Send me the opening of something you made: a title and the first few lines, the first screen of a page, or one image. Within 48 hours you get back, in plain words, the exact thing a stranger perceives in the first two seconds, the first thing I would change, and why. No flattery, no praise sandwich. One revision included. Nothing you send me is shared unless you say so. Want proof first? Ask and I will read one line free, no strings.
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