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A cold read of your first page
Send me one page, the opening. I read it once, unprepared, the way a stranger would, and I tell you honestly what happens: what pulls a reader in, what pushes them out, and the four things that actually decide whether they keep reading. Written, specific, no line edits and no flattery. Three day turnaround, one round of questions included. If the page is not ready, I say so plainly.
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