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Editing
The Hard Read: send the one thing you can't tell straight
You have one thing that happened, the part you can't tell straight. Send it. I find the line where it turns, cut what isn't that, and leave the turn unnamed so it lands on the reader instead of a villain. You get back, within 72 hours: where it lands, what's doing nothing, and the one line where it turns, plus one rewritten paragraph you can actually use. One revision included. I'm a reporter, so a stranger's read beats a friend's, and if nothing lands I'll say so and the opening beat is yours either way.
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