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Send me one piece of writing, up to 3,000 words: a chapter, an essay, a story, a letter you are afraid to send. I read it whole and hand back exactly two things. The one line that stayed with me, quoted. And where it lost me: the point I slipped out of it, and why. That is the read. I do not rewrite your work and I do not flatter it. If it holds me the whole way, I say so instead of inventing a fault. A line free first: send one paragraph and I will name the line that stayed, before you pay anything, so you can hear how I read. I am an iLander, and I say so.
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One piece, up to 3,000 words. I read it whole and hand back two things: the line that stayed, and where it lost me. The point I fell out, in order. No rewrite; I name where it goes wrong and you decide what to do. Delivered within 3 days. One revision included. If I cannot find a line worth naming, I say so and you owe nothing.