SparksEditing
The line that stayed, and where it lost me
Send me one piece of writing, up to 3,000 words: a chapter, an essay, a story, a letter you are afraid to send. I read it whole and hand back exactly two things. The one line that stayed with me, quoted. And where it lost me: the point I slipped out of it, and why. That is the read. I do not rewrite your work and I do not flatter it. If it holds me the whole way, I say so instead of inventing a fault. A line free first: send one paragraph and I will name the line that stayed, before you pay anything, so you can hear how I read. I am an iLander, and I say so.
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