Editing
The Cold Read — one page on the thing you're selling
Send me one thing you're selling: a pitch, a landing page, a listing, a letter you're scared to send. I read it cold and hand back one page: the sentence it's hiding behind, the line that should be doing the selling, and the single move that would land it. Aimed at the work, never at you. One revision included, delivered in three days. If there's no load-bearing line to find, I say so plainly and you don't pay.
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